Yasmine, unfortunately this journal is much like last week's.
Are you reading this feedback?
Q1 is good. However, Q2 seems to be going somewhere but you offer a quotation w/o any resolution to what you are trying to set up.
Proof your work for clarity of your ideas.(This will be very important for out Paper assignments)
Q3 is also good.
Your Q4, though, is much like last week's.
Your quotations fail to present a successful reading of either the e-reserves and your thought are rather jumbled.
Also, you only mention 1 other reading.
This from last week's comments:You must exhibit a clear understanding of the other required reserves each week....you need togive the readings and this Q more time and attention.
Q5 is good and Q6 is also to some degree.
Your Q6 discussion is OK but you fail to frame it in the light of MacD's article. If the the title is what you are referencing then state such and endeavor to make the step off to your broader theme more successful.
Again, I urge you to take more time w/ Qs 4&6
Feed Back… Yasmine, unfortunately this journal is much like last week's. Are you reading this feedback? Q1 is good. However, Q2 seems to be going somewhere but you offer a quotation w/o any resolution to what you are trying to set up. Proof your work for clarity of your ideas. (This will be very important for out Paper assignments) Q3 is also good. Your Q4, though, is much like last week's. Your quotations fail to present a successful reading of either the e-reserves and your thought are rather jumbled. Also, you only mention 1 other reading. This from last week's comments: You must exhibit a clear understanding of the other required reserves each week. ...you need to give the readings and this Q more time and attention. Q5 is good and Q6 is also to some degree. Your Q6 discussion is OK but you fail to frame it in the light of MacD's article. If the the title is what you are referencing then state such and endeavor to make the step off to your broader theme more successful. Again, I urge you to take more time w/ Qs 4&6 Page 1 Page 2 Page 3 Page 4 Page 5 Page 6 Page 7 Page 8 Page 9 Page 10 Page 11 Page 12 bwrigh19 Copyright Page 1 Page 2 Page 3 Page 4 Page 5 Page 6 Page 7 Page 8 Page 9 Page 10 Page 11 Page 12 Page 13 pdempsey Notice bwrigh19 Copyright Page 1 Page 2 Page 3 Page 4 Page 5 Page 6 Page 7 Page 8 Page 9 Page 10 Page 11 Page 12 Page 13 Page 14 Page 15 Page 16