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Writing Tips and Plan Writing Tips and Plans Types of assessments Making a plan Common mistakes Paragraphing References Plagiarism 2000 words Generally introduction & conclusion ≈ 100 words each Body paragraphs ≈ 200 words Introduction + 8 body paragraphs + conclusion = 10 paragraphs total and roughly 2000 words. Primary sources i.e peer reviewed journal articles. 10 years old or less (2011 - 2022). Essay Plan CBT is an excellent therapy that can help people who are experiencing psychosis. It can help clients to learn problem-solving skills and also aid them when they are feeling distressed by symptoms of psychosis. Really? Says who? How to Write a Paragraph P.E.E.L How to Write a Paragraph P.E.E.L P: POINT. What is the point of this paragraph. 1 sentence. If I read it I can say "Ah, this Paragraph is about X" How to Write a Paragraph P.E.E.L P: POINT. What is the point of this paragraph. 1 sentence. If I read it I can say "Ah, this Paragraph is about X" Mindfulness is a beneficial intervention to target Peter's worrying. How to Write a Paragraph P.E.E.L P: POINT. What is the point of this paragraph. 1 sentence. If I read it I can say "Ah, this Paragraph is about X" Mindfulness is a beneficial intervention to target Peter's worrying. Peter has experienced approximately two years of declining mental health. How to Write a Paragraph P.E.E.L P: POINT E: EXPLAIN OR ELABORATE How to Write a Paragraph P.E.E.L P: POINT E: EXPLAIN OR ELABORATE Mindfulness is a beneficial intervention to target Peter's worrying. To implement this the nurse can teach Peter how to do a 10-minute mindfulness practice known as a body scan, where he will mentally scan through his body, focusing on different parts as he relaxes. How to Write a Paragraph P.E.E.L P: POINT E: EXPLAIN OR ELABORATE E: EVIDENCE How to Write a Paragraph P.E.E.L P: POINT E: EXPLAIN OR ELABORATE E: EVIDENCE Mindfulness is a beneficial intervention to target Peter's worrying. To implement this the nurse can teach Peter how to do a 10-minute mindfulness practice known as a body scan, where he will mentally scan through his body, focusing on different parts as he relaxes. Jones (2017) found that mindfulness is effective in reducing anxiety and worrying in patients with Schizophrenia. In turn, targeting worry in this patient group can reduce psychotic symptoms and help people with paranoid delusions feel safer (Zhang, 2019). How to Write a Paragraph P.E.E.L P: POINT E: EXPLAIN OR ELABORATE E: EVIDENCE L: LINK (TO TOPIC) Therefore, it is likely that if Peter practices this daily he will be able to cope with the voices and worry less about them. A nursing intervention that could target Peter’s excessive worrying is mindfulness. To implement this the nurse can teach Peter how to do a 10-minute mindfulness practice known as a body scan, where he will mentally scan through his body, focusing on different parts as he relaxes. Jones (2017) found that mindfulness is effective in reducing anxiety and worrying in patients with Schizophrenia. In turn, targeting worry in this patient group can also reduce psychotic symptoms and help people with paranoid delusions feels safer (Zhang, 2019). Therefore, it is likely that if Peter practices this daily he will be able to cope with the voices and worry less about them. Peter has experienced approximately 2 years of deterioration in his mental health. Firstly, about 2 years ago he stopped going to University. He also quit his job and became more isolative during this time. This worsened approximately 6 months ago when he started to stay in his room all day praying, and the voices began to appear. These behaviours are characteristic of the prodromal phase of schizophrenia where people may experience a decline in functioning, memory or attention problems, as well as anxiety and depression (Walters, 2018). At this time Peter saw a Psychiatrist, but refused to take any medication, and his mental state continued to deteriorate. Peter has experienced approximately 2 years of deterioration in his mental health. Firstly, about 2 years ago he stopped going to University. He also quit his job and became more isolated during this time. This worsened approximately 6 months ago when he started to stay in his room all day praying, and the voices began to appear. These behaviours are characteristic of the prodromal phase of schizophrenia where people may experience a decline in functioning, memory problems, and anxiety or depression (Walters, 2018). At this time Peter saw a Psychiatrist, but refused to take any medication, and his mental state continued to deteriorate. Golden Rules One sentence = three lines MAX One paragraph = 100-200 words Stick to the topic (sentence) Make counterarguments if you can Don't copy and paste (avoid quotes) Don't use contractions (won't, can't, should've) Don't use informal language (gonna) Don't make a list! Writing Tips Discourse markers are your friend. They usually start a new sentence. And = Moreover, In turn, Furthermore e.g = For example, For instance But = However, On the other hand And also = Similarly that's why = Therefore, thus Plagiarism is serious Original sentence in article: 'Cognitive behavioral therapy is a short-term, problem-focused approach with the goal of teaching people who have schizophrenia a variety of coping skills to help them manage difficult situations' (NYULangone, 2019) Plagiarised sentence in article: Cognitive behavioral therapy is a short-duration, problem- solving approach with the objective of educating people who have schizophrenia various coping mechanisms to help them deal with difficult circumstances (NYULangone, 2019) Paraphrased sentence: Cognitive behavioural therapy (CBT) can be used to achieve short-term goals, such as helping people with schizohprenia increase their problem-solving skills. These CBT skills can help people deal with difficulty. (NYULangone, 2019) Plagiarism is serious Do not take another student's paper and use it. Do not copy your own work. Do not take information without showing a source (Jones, 2017) Do not copy and paste, and then change a few words. Contact your lecturer if you need help. There are no stupid questions. Apply for an extension before the due date, not after. You need evidence. Click the link and read the guidelines. ThankThankThankyou!you!you!