Work with a classmate to revise Miller’s paragraph, making sure that every sentence begins the same way, with the subject first. Then read the passage aloud and see if it sounds much less effective...

Work with a classmate to revise Miller’s paragraph, making sure that every sentence begins the same way, with the subject first. Then read the passage aloud and see if it sounds much less effective and memorable. It’s the variety in sentence openings that does the trick!