What did you feel at the moment the occasion was occurring — in control or powerless, proud or embarrassed, vulnerable, detached, judgmental? For example, Staples uses phrases like “swung onto the avenue” to indicate a light mood (par. 1). Sentence strategies like these might help you describe your initial experience of the occasion.
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