We need help in amending and improving my dissertation paper 1) Executive Summary should change to overview and Executive Summary mean to summarize what is the whole project talking about 2) All the...

We need help in amending and improving my dissertation paper 1) Executive Summary should change to overview and Executive Summary mean to summarize what is the whole project talking about 2) All the main header must be in the new page to differentiate 3) Need to input the survey/Questionnaire as the annex 4) Must be able to correlate the sample size of the survey and questionnaire conducted. Gender/Age/Occupation and etc 5) Those short form must be explained what does is stand for like what is S&H, What is Conssas and etc 6) There's one pie chart that talk about 2009, can it be compared with a 2015 pie chart of the statistic 7) There's 2 chart talk about the trend from 2004 to 2008/9. Can we start from 2006 to 2015 instead 8) Design for safety, can explain when its was formed and when it was enforced 9) Conclusion too short, should be 1 to 1 1/2 pages long 10) References all must be included on the annex 11) Break the paragraphs into smaller paragraph 12) Include some photos in the assignments