This assignment is the second draft for my LITERATURE REVIEW for my college English class. The draft is to be 6 full pages in length. 3 Pages have already been completed. HOWEVER, my professor and peers have done reviews on the essay which I have attached to this assignment. PLEASE use the feedback that they provided to correct and improve the literature review as well as add to it. Use the attached literature review questions and source books to pull information from.
Don't forget to add an introduction paragraphs that explain what points will be tackled in this essay.
(Also, please use parenthetical citations)
Last Name:2 Name of the student Name of the Instructor Name of course Date Title: Literature Review Draft Context Q1 Okonkwo, Nneoma E., et al. "COVID-19, and the US response: accelerating health inequities." BMJ evidence-based medicine 26.4 (2021): 176-179. An article by Okonkwo, Nneoma E., et al., published in BMJ evidence-based medicine proved that inequities in Healthcare services have been a long problem in the United States and various clinical and Research capacity across the country has provided a parallel result that has been constantly compared with higher and middle-income countries. Lack of proper assistant to the lower class of the society has been a General issue in America and during the time of the covid-19 pandemic, many of the minority groups of the United States have faced similar issues related to healthcare attendance. From this point of view, it has been understood that the health care perspective sir different in terms of marginalized and resource communities including those who are in jails or detention centers, and people who are immigrants and undocumented. The limited access to healthcare prevention services has given an improper challenge for most African Americans, Latinas, and Native Americans. Although the essay could not suffice enough examples of how it suffered the minorities. Amon, Joseph J., and Margaret Wurth. "A virtual roundtable on COVID-19 and human rights with human rights watch researchers." Health and Human Rights 22.1 (2020): 399. Amon, Joseph J., and Margaret Wurth mentioned in this article published in Health and Human Rights, that according to the human rights law of International standard it is a right of every individual to have the highest standard of health service provided by the government of the country. But in recent years several iniquities have been mentioned where the public has been threatened by lack of proper attendance from the medical departments of any particular country. As medical attention is a basic human right, it is mostly reflected in the recent health care services in America where the majority of the minority groups have been declined from providing proper healthcare services. Human rights are also non-discriminating, it has principles and transparency that can hold human dignity and it can Foster some destruction that can result in crisis. According to the global helpdesk of the covid-19 pandemic, human rights have declined by a noticeable amount and that is why the essay has provided certain insights on the challenges of holding online round table discussions for providing better health care services to all. The essay has not provided the length of the human rights that can affect minors. Q2 Harper, Craig A., et al. "Functional fear predicts public health compliance in the COVID-19 pandemic." International journal of mental health and addiction (2020): 1-14. The current process of health professionals is surrounded by the restrictions of the coronavirus pandemic and how it can be eradicated. The main issue of the article by Harper, Craig A., et al and published in the International Journal of mental health and addiction (2020), has included various roles of individuals that are surrounded to personality-based navigation behavior that is very hard for the government and the medical experts to prevent. The study has declared International community samples where the self-perceived risk of contracting coronavirus, the fear of being sick, and other behavioral changes become very hard to control during the Global pandemic. Constant itching of maintaining social distance and improvement of regular hygiene have not affected the majority of the people and that is fine the potential function of the fear of global crisis has bestowed upon people. Meaning of the government programs have initiated advertisements to maintaining regular hygiene and it has been followed by many people. Although the insincerity among the majority has led to the crisis of public health issues Q3 Patel, Love, et al. "Ethical and legal challenges during the COVID-19 pandemic: are we thinking about rural hospitals." J Rural Health (2020). The article published in J Rural Health has been written by Patel, Love, et al. During the covid-19 pandemic the country has gone through several Health Care policies and changes but the ethical practices related to the medical health services have been questioned by many people of the country. According to International Human Rights the medical help, services need to be distributed among all the citizens of the country and therefore there should not be any health disparities. During the covid-19 pandemic, America has faced health disparities and people of Native American origin, African-Americans, Hispanic groups, and other minority groups have suffered huge help disparities from the Healthcare services and experts from different parts of the country. These kinds of health disparities have led to legal and ethical challenges that have arisen during the global pandemic and it has raised some serious questions about health disparities and their related legal issues. The Global standard of Healthcare requires the American healthcare department to be more humane about the distribution of Healthcare practices that needs to be maintained. Although the essay could not prove the disparities among immigrants and undocumented people. Chen, Shitao, et al. "Challenges and recommendations for mental health providers during the COVID-19 pandemic: the experience of China’s First University-based mental health team." Globalization and Health 16.1 (2020): 1-10. The article is written by Chen, Shitao, et al. and was published in Globalization and Health in 2020. Coronavirus pandemic affecting the world, especially the first world countries have its perks but it has caused lack of distribution in various legal and ethical cases. Many countries have come up with several health initiatives but along with that when psychological impacts have been related to the covid-19 pandemic. Many universities around the clock are researching the possible impacts of the covid-19 pandemic and its psychological insights on human beings. It has been discovered that people are suffering from mental illness and it has been quite heavy on the return from the horror of a pandemic. The pandemic had come up with the death of many of the relatives of many of the survivors and it has been quite difficult. The article has brought up the disparities of healthcare service and its mental impact on many of the people who have been a victim of it. Although it could not focus on the remedy of health disparities. Q4 Srivastava, Kumar Chandan, et al. "Facade of media and social media during COVID-19: A review." Int. J. Res. Pharm. Sci. (2020): 142-149. The coronavirus pandemic has spread around the world but with that, it has also been stated that you must that is related to it. Globally every government has created special rules related to social distancing and Quarantine to prevent the spread of the disease but various social media platforms having trading crucial information that are not true according to medical science. The article by Srivastava, Kumar Chandan, et al, published in Int. J. Res. Pharm. Sci has presented the role of social media to present mission information on people and how it reacts with the overall condition of the patient and their psyche. Digital media has its way of spreading various rumors that can create panic and information through online platforms like Facebook Twitter and YouTube. This kind of news is more tends to circulate than the Global Health Care regulation or the regulation of the Government of a particular country. That is why the governments need to take serious action to prevent the spread of the information and taking uses that create anxiety and fear among people. Works Cited Amon, Joseph J., and Margaret Wurth. "A virtual roundtable on COVID-19 and human rights with human rights watch researchers." Health and Human Rights 22.1 (2020): 399. Chen, Shitao, et al. "Challenges and recommendations for mental health providers during the COVID-19 pandemic: the experience of China’s First University-based mental health team." Globalization and Health 16.1 (2020): 1-10. Harper, Craig A., et al. "Functional fear predicts public health compliance in the COVID-19 pandemic." International journal of mental health and addiction (2020): 1-14. Okonkwo, Nneoma E., et al. "COVID-19, and the US response: accelerating health inequities." BMJ evidence-based medicine 26.4 (2021): 176-179. Patel, Love, et al. "Ethical and legal challenges during the COVID-19 pandemic: are we thinking about rural hospitals." J Rural Health (2020). Srivastava, Kumar Chandan, et al. "Facade of media and social media during COVID-19: A review." Int. J. Res. Pharm. Sci. (2020): 142-149. Feedback Unless I am severely confused, I don't seem to see any visible introduction. It immediately starts off with the author's research questions and jumps into the body paragraphs of the essay. With that being said, I don't think the questions were asked correctly in the sense that the content supporting it doesn't completely follow it. It is hard for me to read the question asked for my perspective then reading the information given afterwards. I believe the content provided is excellent and would allow for a good essay, but with the questions provided, it makes me a little lost as I'm trying to follow along. Lastly, to better understand the topic, it would be good if the author was able to provide or list more specifically ways that us humans can protect others with the virus. Anonymous User , Oct 6 at 12:58pm The topic you chose is very controversial and also has a lot of sources that can be used to help you discuss it. That being said, there are some major things wrong with your literature review. The first thing I noticed was the structure of the essay. You don’t have an introduction and just go straight into the topic. You need an introduction so that the reader has an understanding of what you are talking about. Going straight into the first question is going to leave the reader confused. Another thing is that you put down your research questions before anything. It needs to be after the introduction. Another major flaw in your literature review is when you are quoting your sources. You aren’t putting what you are quoting in quotation marks and that makes it harder to find what is actually being cited. To properly cite your sources, introduce them and follow it up by quoting them and end it off by citing what paragraph or page you pulled it from. Doing this will help the reader clearly see what you are exactly citing. Other than that, you seem to be doing everything else fine. Just need to fix and clean up some things. Anonymous User , Oct 8 at 11:20pm Hey David, when reading your essay I think your topic is very important currently and is a great topic to write your article. The first thing I noticed when I opened your essay was that you did not have an introduction. An introduction is very important to have because it gives background to the audience/reader, also having an introduction paragraph was an important requirement for this assignment