The following extracts contain short, choppy sentences which make the style of writing appear immature. Rewrite after combining the sentences appropriately.
(a) The raw data was collected. A questionnaire was used for collecting this data. The group analysed the data. It found that most people preferred air conditioners to air coolers.
(b) Ruby and Roberts saw infinite possibilities in cyberspace. They were determined to turn their vision into reality. They wanted to build a simple Internet service for ordinary people. Their friends scoffed at their ideas. But Roberts and Ruby doggedly pursued their dream. They analysed other online services. They also assessed the needs of their customers.
(c) The interview ended. Meera got up. She thanked the interviewers. They wished her good luck. Meera observed their facial expressions. She believed she was selected.
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