Rewrite the following messages so that they are more concise:
a. We wanted to invite you to our Kids’ Night special this Tuesday night. The kids will have a lot of fun as we will be having face painting, kids’ games, and the kids can color. The kids eat free as well!
b. We are sending this mailer to let you know that we are giving a free gift and music CD with every $50 you spend on gas at our gas station. The promotion is going on this weekend, July 18–20.
c. The supervisor plans to go to the meeting that will be held on Monday evening at a little bit after 7 p.m. at night.
d. Welcome. We are happy to have in this afternoon’s meeting a guest, Mr. Paul Emerson. Mr. Emerson works at the local Chamber of Commerce and he is here to tell us a little bit about the “Local Tastes” program. If after this afternoon’s meeting you still have more questions regarding the “Local Tastes” program, feel free to call Mr. Emerson at his office.
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