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Patterns for College Writing Thesehelpfulchecklistswillguideyouthroughtheprocess ofwritinganessay. QuestionsaboutYourPurpose 14 QuestionsforCriticalReading 22 ReadingVisualTexts 25 SettingLimits 30 QuestionsforProbing 32 StatingYourThesis 45 RecognizingaPattern 50 WhatNottoDoinanIntroduction 53 EffectiveSupport 56 WhatNottoDoinaConclusion 60 ConstructingaFormalOutline 61 Drafting 63 Revising 66 GuidelinesforPeerEditing 69 EditingforGrammar 83 EditingforPunctuation 86 EditingforSentenceStyleandWordChoice 89 Proofreading 90 CheckingYourPaper’sFormat 91 Anoteaboutthecover Artistsusepatternstogiveshapetotheirartandtoguidetheeyethroughthe elementsofavisualwork.Inthesameway,patternsincompositionhelpto shapeawriter’sworkandtocreatepathwaysforunderstandingit. FOURTEENTHEDITION PatternsforCollegeWriting ARhetoricalReaderandGuide LaurieG.Kirszner UniversityoftheSciences,Emeritus StephenR.Mandell DrexelUniversity ForPeterPhelps,1936–1990,withthanks ForBedford/St.Martin’s VicePresident,Editorial,MacmillanLearningHumanities:EdwinHill DirectorofContentDevelopment:JaneKnetzger DevelopmentManager:MauraShea SeniorProgramDirector:LeasaBurton ProgramManagerforReadersandLiterature:JohnE.SullivanIII DevelopmentalEditor:SherryMooney SeniorContentProjectManager:JessicaGould MediaProducer:RandThomas SeniorContentWorkflowManager:JenniferWetzel MarketingManager:JoyFisherWilliams AssociateEditor:JenniferPrince CopyEditor:KathleenLafferty SeniorPhotoEditor:MarthaFriedman PhotoResearcher:SheriBlaney PermissionsEditor:KalinaIngham SeniorArtDirector:AnnaPalchik TextDesign:RichardKorab CoverDesign:JohnCallahan CoverArt:AutumnInterior,Wheatley,Jenny;PrivateCollection/BridgemanImages OpenerBannerPhoto:JonnyDrake/Shutterstock Composition:LuminaDatamatics,Inc. Copyright©2018,2015,2012,2010byBedford/St.Martin’s. Allrightsreserved.Nopartofthisbookmaybereproduced,storedinaretrievalsystem,ortransmitted inanyformorbyanymeans,electronic,mechanical,photocopying,recording,orotherwise,exceptas maybeexpresslypermittedbytheapplicablecopyrightstatutesorinwritingbythePublisher. 210987fedcba Forinformation,write:Bedford/St.Martin’s,75ArlingtonStreet,Boston,MA02116 ISBN-13978-1-319-12081-8(EPUB) Acknowledgments Textacknowledgmentsandcopyrightsappearatthebackofthebookonpages786–90,whichconstitute anextensionofthecopyrightpage.Artacknowledgmentsandcopyrightsappearonthesamepageas theartselectionstheycover. Preface Sinceitwasfirstpublished,PatternsforCollegeWritinghasbeenusedby millionsofstudentsatcollegesanduniversitiesacrosstheUnitedStates.We havebeendelightedbytheoverwhelminglypositiveresponsetothefirst thirteeneditionsofPatterns,andwecontinuetobegratifiedbypositive feedbackfromthemanyinstructorswhofindPatternstobethemost accessibleandthemostpedagogicallysoundrhetoric-readertheyhaveever used.Inpreparingthisfourteenthedition,wehaveworkedhardtofine-tune thefeaturesthathavemadePatternsthemostpopularcompositionreader availabletodayandtodevelopnewfeaturestoenhancethebook’susefulness forbothinstructorsandstudents. WhatInstructorsandStudentsLikeaboutPatterns forCollegeWriting AnEmphasisonCriticalReading TheIntroduction,“HowtoUseThisBook,”andChapter1,“Readingto Write:BecomingaCriticalReader,”preparestudentstobecomeanalytical readersandwritersbyshowingthemhowtoapplycriticalreadingstrategies toatypicalselectionandbyprovidingsampleresponsestothevariouskinds ofwritingpromptsinthebook.Notonlydoesthismaterialintroducestudents tothebook’sfeatures,butitalsopreparesthemtotacklereadingandwriting assignmentsintheirothercourses. ExtensiveCoverageoftheWritingProcess TheremainingchaptersinPartOne,“TheWritingProcess”(Chapters2 through5),comprisea“mini-rhetoric,”offeringadviceondrafting,writing, revising,andeditingastheyintroducestudentstoactivitiessuchas freewriting,brainstorming,clustering,andjournalwriting.Thesechapters alsoincludenumerouswritingexercisestogivestudentsopportunitiesfor immediatepractice. DetailedCoverageofthePatternsofDevelopment InPartTwo,“ReadingsforWriters,”Chapters6through14explainand illustratethepatternsofdevelopmentthatstudentstypicallyuseintheir collegewritingassignments:narration,description,exemplification,process, causeandeffect,comparisonandcontrast,classificationanddivision, definition,andargumentation.Eachchapterbeginswithacomprehensive introductionthatpresentsadefinitionandaparagraph-lengthexampleofthe patterntobediscussedandthenexplainstheparticularwritingstrategiesand applicationsassociatedwithit.Next,eachchapteranalyzesoneortwo annotatedstudentessaystoshowhowthepatterncanbeusedinparticular collegewritingsituations.Chapter15,“CombiningthePatterns,”illustrates howthevariouspatternsofdevelopmentdiscussedinChapters6through14 canworktogetherinanessay. ADiverseandPopularSelectionofReadings Variedinsubject,style,andculturalperspective,thesixty-eight professionalselectionsengagestudentswhileprovidingthemwith outstandingmodelsforwriting.Wehavetriedtoachieveabalancebetween classicauthors(GeorgeOrwell,JessicaMitford,E.B.White,MartinLuther KingJr.)andnewervoices(BichMinhNguyen,ZeynepTufekci,Marina Keegan)sothatinstructorshaveabroadrangeofreadingstochoosefrom. MoreStudentEssaysthanAnyComparableText Toprovidestudentswithrealisticmodelsforimprovingtheirownwriting, weincludeeighteensamplestudentessays. HelpfulCoverageofGrammarIssues Grammar-in-Contextboxesinchapterintroductionsofferspecificadvice onhowtoidentifyandcorrectthegrammar,mechanics,andpunctuation problemsthatstudentsarelikelytoencounterwhentheyworkwithparticular patternsofdevelopment. ApparatusDesignedtoHelpStudentsLearn Eachprofessionalessayinthetextisfollowedbythreetypesofquestions. Thesequestionsaredesignedtohelpstudentsassesstheirunderstandingof theessay’scontentandofthewriter’spurposeandaudience;torecognizethe stylisticandstructuraltechniquesusedtoshapetheessay;andtobecome sensitivetothenuancesoflanguage.Eachessayisalsoaccompaniedbya JournalEntryprompt,WritingWorkshoptopics(suggestionsforfull-length writingassignments),andThematicConnectionsthatidentifyrelatedreadings inthetext.AlsofollowingeachessayisaCombiningthePatternsfeaturethat focusesondifferentpatternsofdevelopmentusedintheessayandpossible alternativestothesepatterns.EachchapterendswithalistofWriting AssignmentsandaCollaborativeActivity.Manyoftheseassignmentsand activitieshavebeenupdatedtoreflectthemostcurrenttopicsandtrends. ExtensiveCulturalandHistoricalBackgroundforAllReadings Inadditiontoabiographicalheadnote,eachreadingisprecededbya headnotecontainingessentialbackgroundinformationtohelpstudentsmake connectionsbetweenthereadingandthehistorical,social,andeconomic forcesthatshapedit. AnIntroductiontoVisualTexts Everyrhetoricalchapterincludesavisualtext—suchasaphotograph,a pieceoffineart,orpanelsfromagraphicnovel—thatprovidesanaccessible introductiontoeachrhetoricalpattern.Apparatusthathelpsstudentsdiscuss thepatterninitsvisualformfollowseachimage. ThoroughCoverageofWorkingwithSources PartThree,“WorkingwithSources,”takesstudentsthroughtheprocessof writingaresearchpaperandincludesamodelstudentpaperinMLAstyle. (TheAppendixaddressesAPAstyleandincludesamodelAPApaper.) What’sNewinThisEdition EngagingNewReadings Thetwenty-fivenewprofessionalessaystreattopicsofcurrentinterest. IsabelWilkersonexploresthehistoryof“EmmettTillandTamirRice,Sons oftheGreatMigration.”JoshBarroexplains“WhyStealingCarsWentOutof Fashion.”KarenMillerPensieroshowsusthe“PhotosThatChangeHistory.” Inallcases,readingshavebeencarefullyselectedfortheirhigh-interest subjectmatteraswellasfortheireffectivenessasteachablemodelsfor studentwriting. ArgumentationChapterUpdated Theargumentchapterhasbeenrevisedtofocusonissuesofparticular importancetocollegestudents.Itincludestwonewdebates(“ShouldPublic CollegesBeFree?”and“DoesItPaytoStudytheHumanities?”)andonenew casebook(“DoCollegeStudentsNeedTriggerWarnings?”). 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Acknowledgments Asalways,friends,colleagues,students,andfamilyallhelpedthisproject along.Ofparticularvalueweretheresponsestothequestionnairessenttothe followinginstructors,whoprovidedfrankandhelpfuladvice:Amelia MagallanesArguijo,LaredoCommunityCollege;VictoriaBryan,Cleveland StateCommunityCollege;ThomasChester,IvyTechCommunityCollege; AnneDearing,HudsonValleyCommunityCollege;JenniferEble,Cleveland StateCommunityCollege;MarcusEmbry,UniversityofNorthernColorado; UlandaForbess,NorthLakeCollege;JanGeyer,HudsonValleyCommunity College;PriscillaGlanville,StateCollegeofFlorida;ScottHathaway, HudsonValleyCommunityCollege;JoshMiller,CapeFearCommunity College;JanetMinc,UniversityofAkronWayneCollege;JenniferRavey, LamarUniversity;CherylSaba,CapeFearCommunityCollege;Ana Schnellmann,LindenwoodUniversity;DhipinderWalia,LehmanCollege; andCoreenWees,IowaWesternCommunityCollege.Additionalthanksto CedricBurroughsatMarquetteUniversityforhisvaluablesuggestions. http://macmillanlearning.com SpecialthanksgotoJeffOusborneforhishelpwithsomeoftheapparatus andforrevisingtheheadnotesandtheResourcesforInstructors. ThroughfourteeneditionsofPatternsforCollegeWriting,wehave enjoyedawonderfulworkingrelationshipwithBedford/St.Martin’s.Wehave alwaysfoundtheeditorialandproductionstafftobeefficient,cooperative, andgenerouswiththeirtimeandadvice.Asalways,weappreciatethe encouragementandadviceofourlongtimefriend,NancyPerry.Inaddition, wethankJoanFeinberg,pastpresidentofBedford/St.Martin’s,forher supportforthisprojectandforhertrustinus.Duringourworkonthis edition,wehavebenefitedfromourproductiverelationshipwithJohn Sullivan,ProgramManager,ReadersandLiterature,whohelpedusmakethis editionofPatternsthebestitcouldbe.Wehavebeenespeciallyluckyto workonthiseditionwithourtalenteddevelopmentaleditor,SherryMooney,a realstar.WearealsogratefultoJessicaGould,seniorcontentproject manager,andLisaKinne,managingeditor,fortheirworkoverseeingthe productionofthisedition;JohnCallahanfortheattractivenewcover;and associateeditorJenniferPrinceforherinvaluablehelpwithtaskslargeand small.Wearefortunatetohaveenjoyedourlongandfulfillingcollaboration; weknowhowrareasuccessfulpartnershiplikeoursis.Wealsoknowhow luckywearetohaveourfamiliestohelpkeepusintouchwiththethingsthat reallymatter. LaurieG.Kirszner StephenR.Mandell Contents Preface ThematicGuidetotheContents Introduction:HowtoUseThisBook HenryLouisGatesJr.,“What’sinaName?” RespondingtoanEssay RespondingtoOtherKindsofTexts PARTONE:TheWritingProcess 1 ReadingtoWrite:BecomingaCriticalReader UnderstandingCriticalReading DeterminingYourPurpose CHECKLIST:QuestionsaboutYourPurpose Previewing Highlighting BrentStaples,CuttingandPasting:ASeniorThesisby(InsertName) MoisésNaím,TheYouTubeEffect “Althoughinternationalnewsoperationsemploythousandsof professionaljournalists,theywillneverbeasomnipresentasmillions ofpeoplecarryingcellphonesthatcanrecordvideo.” Annotating CHECKLIST:QuestionsforCriticalReading BrentStaples,CuttingandPasting:ASeniorThesisby(InsertName) (withsampleannotations) ReadingVisualTexts CHECKLIST:ReadingVisualTexts 2 Invention UnderstandingYourAssignment SettingLimits Length Purpose Audience Occasion Knowledge CHECKLIST:SettingLimits MovingfromSubjecttoTopic QuestionsforProbing CHECKLIST:QuestionsforProbing Freewriting AStudentWriter:Freewriting FindingSomethingtoSay Brainstorming AStudentWriter:Brainstorming JournalWriting AStudentWriter:JournalWriting GroupingIdeas Clustering AStudentWriter:Clustering MakinganInformalOutline AStudentWriter:MakinganInformalOutline UnderstandingThesisandSupport DevelopingaThesis DefiningtheThesisStatement DecidingonaThesis StatingYourThesis ImplyingaThesis AStudentWriter:DevelopingaThesis CHECKLIST:StatingYourThesis 3 Arrangement RecognizingaPattern CHECKLIST:RecognizingaPattern UnderstandingthePartsoftheEssay TheIntroduction CHECKLIST:WhatNottoDoinanIntroduction TheBodyParagraphs CHECKLIST:EffectiveSupport TheConclusion CHECKLIST:WhatNottoDoinaConclusion ConstructingaFormalOutline CHECKLIST:ConstructingaFormalOutline AStudentWriter:ConstructingaFormalOutline 4 DraftingandRevising WritingYourFirstDraft CHECKLIST:Drafting AStudentWriter:WritingaFirstDraft RevisingYourEssay RevisingwithanOutline RevisingwithaChecklist CHECKLIST:Revising RevisingwithYourInstructor’sWrittenComments RevisinginaConference RevisinginaPeer-EditingGroup CHECKLIST:GuidelinesforPeerEditing StrategiesforRevising AStudentWriter:RevisingaFirstDraft PeerEditingWorksheet PointsforSpecialAttention:FirstDraft TheIntroduction TheBodyParagraphs TheConclusion AStudentWriter:RevisingaSecondDraft PointsforSpecialAttention:SecondDraft TheIntroduction TheBodyParagraphs TheConclusion WorkingwithSources TheTitle AStudentWriter:PreparingaFinalDraft SAMPLESTUDENTESSAY:LauraBobnak,ThePriceofSilence (StudentEssay) 5 EditingandProofreading EditingforGrammar BeSureSubjectsandVerbsAgree BeSureVerbTensesAreAccurateandConsistent BeSurePronounReferencesAreClear BeSureSentencesAreComplete BeCarefulNottoRunSentencesTogetherwithoutProper Punctuation BeCarefultoAvoidMisplacedandDanglingModifiers BeSureSentenceElementsAreParallel CHECKLIST:EditingforGrammar EditingforPunctuation LearnWhentoUseCommas—andWhenNottoUseThem LearnWhentoUseSemicolons LearnWhentoUseApostrophes LearnWhentoUseQuotationMarks LearnWhentoUseDashesandColons CHECKLIST:EditingforPunctuation EditingforSentenceStyleandWordChoice EliminateAwkwardPhrasing BeSureYourSentencesAreConcise BeSureYourSentencesAreVaried ChooseYourWordsCarefully CHECKLIST:EditingforSentenceStyleandWordChoice ProofreadingYourEssay CheckforCommonlyConfusedWords CheckforMisspellingsandFaultyCapitalization CheckforTypos CHECKLIST:Proofreading CheckingYourPaper’sFormat CHECKLIST:CheckingYourPaper’sFormat PARTTWO:ReadingsforWriters 6 Narration WhatIsNarration? UsingNarration PlanningaNarrativeEssay DevelopingaThesisStatement IncludingEnoughDetail VaryingSentenceStructure MaintainingClearNarrativeOrder StructuringaNarrativeEssay RevisingaNarrativeEssay REVISIONCHECKLIST:Narration EditingaNarrativeEssay GRAMMARINCONTEXT:AvoidingRun-Ons EDITINGCHECKLIST:Narration AStudentWriter:LiteracyNarrative EricaSarno,BecomingaWriter(StudentEssay) PointsforSpecialAttention FocusonRevision AStudentWriter:Narration TiffanyForte,MyFieldofDreams(StudentEssay) PointsforSpecialAttention FocusonRevision PEEREDITINGWORKSHEET:NARRATION VisualText:MarjaneSatrapi,fromPersepolisII(GraphicFiction) JunotDíaz,TheMoney “ThesummerIwastwelve,myfamilywentawayona‘vacation’— oneofmyfather’shalf-bakedget-to-know-our-country-better-by- sleeping-in-the-vanextravaganzas—andwhenwereturnedtoJersey, exhausted,battered,wefoundourfrontdoorunlocked….The thieveshadkeptitsimple;they’dsnatchedaportableradio,someof myDungeons&Dragonshardcovers,and,ofcourse,Mami’s remittances.” OceanVuong,Surrendering “Thetaskallowedmetocamouflagemyself;aslongasIlookedas thoughIweredoingsomethingsmart,myshameandfailurewere hidden.ThetroublebeganwhenIdecidedtobedangerously ambitious.Whichistosay,Idecidedtowriteapoem.” BonnieSmith-Yackel,MyMotherNeverWorked “Fromherwheelchairshecannedpickles,bakedbread,ironed clothes,wrotedozensoflettersweeklytoherfriendsandher‘half dozenormorekids,’andmadethreepatchworkhousecoatsandone quilt.” MartinGansberg,Thirty-EightWhoSawMurderDidn’tCallthe Police “Formorethanhalfanhourthirty-eightrespectable,law-abiding citizensinQueenswatchedakillerstalkandstabawomaninthree separateattacks….Notonepersontelephonedthepoliceduringthe assault;onewitnesscalledafterthewomanwasdead.” GeorgeOrwell,ShootinganElephant “ButIdidnotwanttoshoottheelephant.Iwatchedhimbeatinghis bunchofgrassagainsthisknees,withthepreoccupiedgrandmotherly airthatelephantshave.Itseemedtomethatitwouldbemurderto shoothim.” ShermanAlexie,IndianEducation(Fiction) “ThefarmtownhighschoolIplayforisnicknamedthe‘Indians,’and I’mprobablytheonlyactualIndianevertoplayforateamwithsuch amascot.” WritingAssignmentsforNarration CollaborativeActivityforNarration 7 Description WhatIsDescription? UsingDescription UnderstandingObjectiveDescription CHECKLIST:UsingVisualsEffectively UnderstandingSubjectiveDescription UsingObjectiveandSubjectiveLanguage SelectingDetails PlanningaDescriptiveEssay DevelopingaThesisStatement OrganizingDetails UsingTransitions StructuringaDescriptiveEssay RevisingaDescriptiveEssay REVISIONCHECKLIST:Description EditingaDescriptiveEssay GRAMMARINCONTEXT:AvoidingMisplacedandDanglingModifiers EDITINGCHECKLIST:Description AStudentWriter:ObjectiveDescription MalloryCogan,MyGrandfather’sGlobe(StudentEssay) PointsforSpecialAttention FocusonRevision AStudentWriter:SubjectiveDescription MaryLim,TheValleyofWindmills(StudentEssay) PointsforSpecialAttention FocusonRevision PEER-EDITINGWORKSHEET:DESCRIPTION VisualText:AnselAdams,JacksonLake(Photo) BichMinhNguyen,GoodbyetoMyTwinkieDays “Forme,achildofVietnameseimmigrantsgrowingupinMichigan inthe1980s,Twinkieswereatickettoassimilation:thegoldencake, moregoldenthanthehairIwishedIhad,filledwithsweetwhite cream.Backthen,junkfoodsseemedtorepresentanidealof Americanindulgence.” SuzanneBerne,GroundZero “Likeme,perhaps,thepeoplearoundmehadinmindimagesfrom televisionandnewspaperpictures:thecollapsingbuildings,the runningofficeworkers,theblackplumeofsmokeagainstabright bluesky.Likeme,theywereprobablytryingtosuperimposethose terribleimagesontotheindustriousemptinessrightinfrontofthem.” MarinaKeegan,StabilityinMotion “Mycarwasnotgross;itwasoccupied,cluttered,cramped.It becameanextensionofmybedroom,andthusanextensionof myself.” HeatherRogers,TheHiddenLifeofGarbage “There’sareasonlandfillsaretuckedaway,ontheedgeoftown,in otherwiseuntraveledterrain,camouflagedbyhydroseeded,neatly tieredslopes.Ifpeoplesawwhathappenedtotheirwaste,livedwith thestench,witnessedthescaleofdestruction,theymightstartasking difficultquestions.” E.B.White,OnceMoretotheLake “Summertime,ohsummertime,patternoflifeindelible,thefade- prooflake,thewoodsunshatterable,thepasturewiththesweetfern andthejuniperforeverandever…” KateChopin,TheStorm(Fiction) “Theydidnothearthecrashingtorrents,andtheroaroftheelements madeherlaughasshelayinhisarms.Shewasarevelationinthat dim,mysteriouschamber;aswhiteasthecouchshelayupon.” WritingAssignmentsforDescription CollaborativeActivityforDescription 8 Exemplification WhatIsExemplification? UsingExemplification UsingExamplestoExplainandClarify UsingExamplestoAddInterest UsingExamplestoPersuade PlanninganExemplificationEssay DevelopingaThesisStatement ProvidingEnoughExamples ChoosingaFairRangeofExamples UsingTransitions StructuringanExemplificationEssay RevisinganExemplificationEssay REVISIONCHECKLIST:Exemplification EditinganExemplificationEssay GRAMMARINCONTEXT:UsingCommasinaSeries EDITINGCHECKLIST:Exemplification AStudentWriter:Exemplification KristyBredin,JobApplicationLetter(StudentEssay) PointsforSpecialAttention FocusonRevision AStudentWriter:Exemplification GraceKu,Midnight(StudentEssay) PointsforSpecialAttention FocusonRevision PEER-EDITINGWORKSHEET:EXEMPLIFICATION VisualTexts:FourTattoos:CharlesThatcher,“Alisha,Loretta”; CarrieVillines,“PositiveOutlook”;AnthonyBradshaw,“Bar Code”;GuidoKoppes,“Owl”(Photos) ZeynepTufekci,WhythePostOfficeMakesAmericaGreat “Yes,Iwastold,intheUnitedStates,mailgetspickedupfromyour house,sixdaysaweek,freeofcharge.ItoldmyfriendsinTurkey aboutallthis.Theyshooktheirheadsindisbelief,wonderinghow easilyIhadbeenrecruitedasaC.I.A.agent,sayingimplausibly flatteringthingsaboutmynewcountry.” JudithOrtizCofer,TheMythoftheLatinWoman:IJustMetaGirl NamedMaria “[Y]oucanleavetheisland,mastertheEnglishlanguage,andtravel asfarasyoucan,butifyouareaLatina,especiallyonelikemewho soobviouslybelongstoRitaMoreno’sgenepool,theislandtravels withyou.” BrentStaples,JustWalkOnBy:ABlackManPondersHisPowerto AlterPublicSpace “Itwasintheechoofthatterrifiedwoman’sfootfallsthatIfirst begantoknowtheunwieldyinheritanceI’dcomeinto—theability toalterpublicspaceinuglyways.” DeborahL.Rhode,WhyLooksAretheLastBastionof Discrimination “Amongthekeyfindingsofaquarter-century’sworthofresearch: Unattractivepeoplearelesslikelytobehiredandpromoted,andthey earnlowersalaries,eveninfieldsinwhichlookshavenoobvious relationshiptoprofessionalduties.” MaiaSzalavitz,TenWaysWeGettheOddsWrong “Andthoughemotionsarethemselvescriticaltomakingrational decisions,theyweredesignedforaworldinwhichdangerstookthe formofpredators,notpollutants.Ouremotionspushustomakesnap judgmentsthatonceweresensible—butmaynotbeanymore.” JamaicaKincaid,“Girl”(Fiction) “[T]hisishowtobullyaman;thisishowamanbulliesyou;thisis howtoloveaman,andifthisdoesn’tworkthereareotherways,and iftheydon’tworkdon’tfeeltoobadaboutgivingup….” WritingAssignmentsforExemplification CollaborativeActivityforExemplification 9 Process WhatIsProcess? UnderstandingInstructions UnderstandingProcessExplanations UsingProcess PlanningaProcessEssay AccommodatingYourAudience DevelopingaThesisStatement UsingTransitions StructuringaProcessEssay RevisingaProcessEssay REVISIONCHECKLIST:Process EditingaProcessEssay GRAMMARINCONTEXT:AvoidingUnnecessaryShifts EDITINGCHECKLIST:Process AStudentWriter:Instructions EricMcGlade,TheSearch(StudentEssay) PointsforSpecialAttention FocusonRevision AStudentWriter:ProcessExplanation MelanyHunt,MediumAshBrown(StudentEssay) PointsforSpecialAttention FocusonRevision PEEREDITINGWORKSHEET:PROCESS VisualText:NationalGeographic,YellowstoneFires,PastandFuture (Illustrations) NaomiRosenberg,HowtoTellaMotherHerChildIsDead “Youdon’tmakeaphonecall,youdonottalktothemedicalstudent, youdonotputinanorder.Younevermakeherwait.Sheishis mother.” StanleyFish,GettingCoffeeIsHardtoDo “Youwillfaceacoordinationproblemifyouareageneraldeploying troops,tanks,helicopters,food,tents,andmedicalsupplies,orifyou aretheCEOofalargecompanyjugglingthedemandsofdesign, personnel,inventory,andproductions….Andthesedays,youwill faceacoordinationproblemifyouwanttogetacupofcoffee.” JoshuaPivenandDavidBorgenicht,HowtoBuildaMonsterfrom SpareParts “Waitforalightningbolttostriketherod,sendingelectricitysurging throughthewiresandgalvanizingthecreature’snervoussysteminto firstreflexiveandthensustainableactivity.Thatis:life.Life!” ArthurMiller,GetItRight:PrivatizeExecutions “PeoplecanbeexecutedinplaceslikeSheaStadiumbeforeimmense payingaudiences….Aswithallsportsevents,acertainritualwould seeminevitableandwouldquicklybecomeanexpectedpartofthe occasion.” JessicaMitford,TheEmbalmingofMr.Jones “Forthosewhohavethestomachforit,letusparttheformaldehyde curtain.” ShirleyJackson,TheLottery(Fiction) “TherewasagreatdealoffussingtobedonebeforeMr.Summers declaredthelotteryopen.Thereweretheliststomakeup—ofheads offamilies,headsofhouseholdsineachfamily,membersofeach householdineachfamily.” WritingAssignmentsforProcess CollaborativeActivityforProcess 10 CauseandEffect WhatIsCauseandEffect? UsingCauseandEffect UnderstandingMainandContributoryCauses UnderstandingImmediateandRemoteCauses UnderstandingCausalChains AvoidingPostHocReasoning PlanningaCause-and-EffectEssay DevelopingaThesisStatement ArrangingCausesandEffects UsingTransitions StructuringaCause-and-EffectEssay FindingCauses DescribingorPredictingEffects RevisingaCause-and-EffectEssay REVISIONCHECKLIST:CauseandEffect EditingaCause-and-EffectEssay GRAMMARINCONTEXT:Avoiding“Thereasonisbecause”;Using AffectandEffectCorrectly EDITINGCHECKLIST:CauseandEffect AStudentWriter:CauseandEffect EvelynPellicane,TheIrishFamine,1845–1849(StudentEssay) PointsforSpecialAttention FocusonRevision PEER-EDITINGWORKSHEET:CAUSEANDEFFECT VisualText:JeffreyCoolidge,RubeGoldbergMachine(Photo) JoshBarro,WhyStealingCarsWentOutofFashion “Oldcarsareeasiertosteal,andthereareplentyofthemstillonthe road.Butthere’sanobviousproblemwithstealingthem:They’renot worthverymuch.” MaggieKoerth-Baker,WhyRationalPeopleBuyintoConspiracy Theories “Perfectlysanemindspossessanincrediblecapacityfordeveloping narratives,andevensomeofthewildestconspiracytheoriescanbe groundedinrationalthinking,whichmakesthemthatmuchmore pernicious.” SimonCottee,WhatMotivatesTerrorists? “Sometimespeopledowhattheydoforthereasonstheyprofess. Sometimesnot,becausewhattheydoismotivatedbyreasonsthatare toodark,shameful,orbizarretobeopenlyacknowledged.Sometimes peopledothingsthataresomorallycontentiousthatwhencalledto accounttheyareliabletoexcuseorjustify,ratherthantoexplain, theiractions.Terroristsunquestionablyfallintothiscategory.” LindaM.Hasselstrom,APeacefulWomanExplainsWhySheCarries aGun “Peoplewhohavenotgrownupwiththeideathattheyarecapableof protectingthemselves—inotherwords,mostwomen—mighthave toworkhardtoconvincethemselvesoftheirability,andofthe necessity.Handgunownershipneednotturnusintogunslingers,but itcanbepartofbelievingin,andrelyingon,ourselvesfor protection.” KarenMillerPensiero,PhotosThatChangeHistory “Thoughtheissueshavevariedgreatlyoverthedecades,historians pointtoothereraswhenphotographshaveresonatedinthesame transformativeway,creatingnewsocialawarenessandspurring changesinpolicy.” JaniceMirikitani,SuicideNote(Poetry) “Iapologize. Tasksdonotcomeeasily. Eachfailure,aglacier. Eachdisapproval,abootprint. Eachdisappointment, Iceabovemyriver.” WritingAssignmentsforCauseandEffect CollaborativeActivityforCauseandEffect 11 ComparisonandContrast WhatIsComparisonandContrast? UsingComparisonandContrast PlanningaComparison-and-ContrastEssay RecognizingComparison-and-ContrastAssignments EstablishingaBasisforComparison SelectingPointsforDiscussion DevelopingaThesisStatement StructuringaComparison-and-ContrastEssay UsingSubject-by-SubjectComparison UsingPoint-by-PointComparison UsingTransitions RevisingaComparison-and-ContrastEssay REVISIONCHECKLIST:ComparisonandContrast EditingaComparison-and-ContrastEssay GRAMMARINCONTEXT:UsingParallelism EDITINGCHECKLIST:ComparisonandContrast AStudentWriter:Subject-by-SubjectComparison MarkCotharn,BrainsversusBrawn(StudentEssay) PointsforSpecialAttention FocusonRevision AStudentWriter:Point-by-PointComparison MariaTecson,AComparisonofTwoWebsitesonAttentionDeficit Disorder(StudentEssay) PointsforSpecialAttention FocusonRevision PEER-EDITINGWORKSHEET:COMPARISONANDCONTRAST VisualTexts:AugusteRodin,TheKiss,andRobertIndiana,LOVE (Sculptures) BruceCatton,GrantandLee:AStudyinContrasts “WhenUlyssesS.GrantandRobertE.Leemetintheparlorofa modesthouseatAppomattoxCourtHouse,Virginia,onApril9, 1865,toworkoutthetermsforthesurrenderofLee’sArmyof NorthernVirginia,agreatchapterinAmericanlifecametoaclose, andagreatnewchapterbegan.” JuanWilliams,SongsoftheSummerof1963…andToday “Theemotionalupliftofthemonumentalmarchisauniverseoftime awayfromtoday’sdegradingrapmusic…thatconfusesand depressesracerelationsinAmericanow.” AmyChua,WhyChineseMothersAreSuperior “ChineseparentscanordertheirkidstogetstraightAs.Western parentscanonlyasktheirkidstotrytheirbest.Chineseparentscan say,“You’relazy.Allyourclassmatesaregettingaheadofyou.”By contrast,Westernparentshavetostrugglewiththeirownconflicted feelingsaboutachievement,andtrytopersuadethemselvesthat they’renotdisappointedabouthowtheirkidsturnedout.” EllenLaird,I’mYourTeacher,NotYourInternet-ServiceProvider “Thehoneymoonisover.Myromancewithdistanceteachingis losingitsspark.” DeborahTannen,Sex,Lies,andConversation “Howcanwomenandmenhavesuchdifferentimpressionsof communicationinmarriage?Whythewidespreadimbalanceintheir interestsandexpectations?” IsabelWilkerson,EmmettTillandTamirRice,SonsoftheGreat Migration “Considerthestoryoftwomotherswhoselivesbookendthe migrationandwhosefamilylineswouldmeetsimilar,unimaginable fates.Thehorrorstheywerefleeingwouldfollowtheminfreedom andintothecurrentday.” WilliamShakespeare,ShallIcomparetheetoasummer’sday? (Poetry) “Butthyeternalsummershallnotfade, Norlosepossessionofthatfairthouow’st; Norshalldeathbragthouwand’restinhisshade, Whenineternallinestotimethougrow’st” WritingAssignmentsforComparisonandContrast CollaborativeActivityforComparisonandContrast 12 ClassificationandDivision WhatIsClassificationandDivision? UnderstandingClassification UnderstandingDivision UsingClassificationandDivision PlanningaClassification-and-DivisionEssay SelectingandArrangingCategories DevelopingaThesisStatement CHECKLIST:EstablishingCategories UsingTransitions StructuringaClassification-and-DivisionEssay RevisingaClassification-and-DivisionEssay REVISIONCHECKLIST:ClassificationandDivision EditingaClassification-and-DivisionEssay GRAMMARINCONTEXT:UsingaColontoIntroduceYourCategories EDITINGCHECKLIST:ClassificationandDivision AStudentWriter:ClassificationandDivision JosieMartinez,WhatILearned(andDidn’tLearn)inCollege (StudentEssay) PointsforSpecialAttention FocusonRevision PEER-EDITINGWORKSHEET:CLASSIFICATIONANDDIVISION VisualText:CoffeeTypes(Chart) OlgaKhazan,TheThreeTypesofHappiness “Minimalismishot,culturally,andforyearssciencehasassuredus thatitwasalsothepathtomaximalbliss.” CarolynFosterSegal,TheDogAteMyTablet,andOtherTalesof Woe “Withashowofenergyandcreativitythatwouldbeadmirableif appliedtothe(missing)assignmentsinquestion,mystudentspersist, weekafterweek,semesteraftersemester,yearafteryear,inoffering excusesaboutwhytheirworkisnotready.Thosereasonsfallinto severalbroadcategories:thefamily,thebestfriend,theevilsofdorm life,theevilsoftechnology,andthetotallybizarre.” AmyTan,MotherTongue “Ispendagreatdealofmytimethinkingaboutthepowerof language—thewayitcanevokeanemotion,avisualimage,a complexidea,orasimpletruth.Languageisthetoolofmytrade. AndIusethemall—alltheEnglishesIgrewupwith.” StephanieEricsson,TheWaysWeLie “Welie.Wealldo.Weexaggerate,weminimize,weavoid confrontation,wesparepeople’sfeelings,weconvenientlyforget,we keepsecrets,wejustifylyingtothebig-guyinstitutions.” HenryReed,NamingofParts(Poetry) “Andthisyoucanseeisthebolt.Thepurposeofthis Istoopenthebreech,asyousee.Wecanslideit Rapidlybackwardsandforwards:wecallthis Easingthespring.Andrapidlybackwardsandforwards Theearlybeesareassaultingandfumblingtheflowers: TheycalliteasingtheSpring.” WritingAssignmentsforClassificationandDivision CollaborativeActivityforClassificationandDivision 13 Definition WhatIsDefinition? UnderstandingFormalDefinitions UnderstandingExtendedDefinitions UsingDefinition PlanningaDefinitionEssay DevelopingaThesisStatement DecidingonaPatternofDevelopment StructuringaDefinitionEssay RevisingaDefinitionEssay REVISIONCHECKLIST:Definition EditingaDefinitionEssay GRAMMARINCONTEXT:Avoidingiswhenandiswhere EDITINGCHECKLIST:Definition AStudentWriter:Definition AjoyMahtab,TheUntouchable(StudentEssay) PointsforSpecialAttention FocusonRevision PEER-EDITINGWORKSHEET:DEFINITION VisualText:U.S.CensusBureau,U.S.Census2010Form (Questionnaire) JudyBrady,IWantaWife “MyGod,whowouldn’twantawife?” JoséAntonioBurciaga,Tortillas “MyearliestmemoryoftortillasismyMamátellingmenottoplay withthem.Ihadbitteneyeholesinoneandwaswearingitasamask atthedinnertable.” AmyWilentz,AZombieIsaSlaveForever “Thezombieisadeadpersonwhocannotgetacrosstolanguinée. Thisfinalrest—ingreen,leafy,heavenlyAfrica,withnosugarcane tocutandnomastertoappeaseorserve—isunavailabletothe zombie.Tobecomeazombiewastheslave’sworstnightmare:tobe deadandstillaslave,aneternalfieldhand.” RichardPosner,OnPlagiarism “Thepublicwantsagoodread,agoodshow,andthefactthatabook oraplaymaybetheworkofmanyhands—as,intruth,mostartand entertainmentare—isofnoconsequencetoit.Theharmisnottothe readerbuttothosewriterswhoseworkdoesnotglitterwithstolen gold.” EmilyDickinson,“Hope”isthethingwithfeathers(Poetry) “‘Hope’isthethingwithfeathers— Thatperchesinthesoul— Andsingsthetunewithoutthewords— Andneverstops—atall—” WritingAssignmentsforDefinition CollaborativeActivityforDefinition 14 Argumentation WhatIsArgumentation? UnderstandingArgumentationandPersuasion PlanninganArgumentativeEssay ChoosingaTopic DevelopingaThesis AnalyzingYourAudience GatheringandDocumentingEvidence DealingwiththeOpposition UnderstandingRogerianArgument CHECKLIST:GuidelinesforUsingRogerianArgument UsingDeductiveandInductiveArguments UsingDeductiveArguments UsingInductiveArguments UsingToulminLogic RecognizingFallacies UsingTransitions StructuringanArgumentativeEssay RevisinganArgumentativeEssay REVISIONCHECKLIST:Argumentation EditinganArgumentativeEssay GRAMMARINCONTEXT:UsingCoordinatingandSubordinating Conjunctions EDITINGCHECKLIST:Argumentation AStudentWriter:Argumentation MartaRamos,JustSayNo(StudentEssay) PointsforSpecialAttention FocusonRevision PEER-EDITINGWORKSHEET:ARGUMENTATION VisualText:StopTextsStopWrecks.org,YouDon’tWantThem RespondingtoYourText(Ad) ThomasJefferson,TheDeclarationofIndependence “Weholdthesetruthstobeself-evident,thatallmenarecreated equal,thattheyareendowedbytheirCreatorwithcertaininalienable rights,thatamongthesearelife,liberty,andthepursuitof happiness.” RachelCarson,TheObligationtoEndure “Themostalarmingofallman’sassaultsupontheenvironmentisthe contaminationofair,earth,rivers,andseawithdangerousandeven lethalmaterials.Thispollutionisforthemostpartirrecoverable;the chainofevilitinitiatesnotonlyintheworldthatmustsupportlife butinlivingtissuesisforthemostpartirreversible.” MartinLutherKingJr.,LetterfromBirminghamJail “ForyearsnowIhaveheardtheword‘Wait!’Itringsintheearof everyNegrowithpiercingfamiliarity.This‘Wait’hasalmostalways meant‘Never.’Wemustcometosee,withoneofourdistinguished jurists,that‘justicetoolongdelayedisjusticedenied.’” ◾DEBATE:ShouldPublicCollegesandUniversitiesBeFree? AaronBady,PublicUniversitiesShouldBeFree “Publiceducationshouldbefree.Ifitisn’tfree,itisn’tpublic education.” MattBruenig,TheCaseagainstFreeCollege “Withoutadramaticoverhaulofhowweunderstandstudentbenefits, makingcollegemoreorentirelyfreewouldmostlikelyboostthe wealthofcollegeattendeeswithoutsecuringanyimportant egalitariangains.” ◾DEBATE:DoesItPaytoStudytheHumanities? LeonWieseltier,PerhapsCultureIsNowtheCounterculture:A DefenseoftheHumanities “ThetechnologicalmentalitythathasbecometheAmerican worldviewinstructsustopreferpracticalquestionstoquestionsof meaning—toaskofthingsnotiftheyaretrueorfalse,orgoodor evil,buthowtheywork.” VinodKhosla,IsMajoringinLiberalArtsaMistakeforStudents? “[L]iberalartseducationintheUnitedStatesisaminorevolutionof eighteenthcenturyEuropeaneducation.Theworldneedssomething morethanthat.” ◾CASEBOOK:DoCollegeStudentsNeedTriggerWarnings? GeoffreyR.Stone,FreeExpressioninPeril “Universitiesmusteducateourstudentstounderstandthatacademic freedomisnotalawofnature.Itisnotsomethingtobetakenfor granted.Itis,rather,ahard-wonacquisitioninalengthystrugglefor academicintegrity.” SophieDownes,TriggerWarnings,SafeSpaces,andFreeSpeech, Too “Civicdiscourseinthiscountryhasbecomeprettyugly,somaybeit’s notsurprisingthatstudentsaretryingtocreatewaystohave compassionate,civildialogue.” JenniferMedina,Warning:TheLiteraryCanonCouldMakeStudents Squirm “Collegesacrossthecountrythisspringhavebeenwrestlingwith studentrequestsforwhatareknownas‘triggerwarnings.’” SorayaChemaly,What’sReallyImportantabout“TriggerWarnings” “Conversationsabouttriggerwarnings,however,seemmoreand morelikesuperficialproxiesforonesaboutdeeperproblemson campusesregardingdiversity,equity,thecorporatizationof education,and,thedreadedword,privilege.” ◾CASEBOOK:DoGunsHaveaPlaceonCollegeCampuses? AndrewWilson,WhyIWouldn’tGototheUniversityofTexasLaw School “Howcanprofessorsteachcoursesorassigngradeswiththe possibilityofviolentretaliationonepullofthetriggeraway?How canstudentsengageoneanotherifthefearofoffenseisnow informedbythefearofsafety?” StudentsforGun-FreeSchools,WhyOurCampusesAreSafer withoutConcealedHandguns “Thesafestpolicytolimitpotentialviolenceistoprohibitstudents andfacultyfromkeepinghandgunsoncampusandallowtrainedlaw enforcementofficerstoprovideforcampussecurity.” StudentsforConcealedCarry,WhyOurCampusesAreNotSafer withoutConcealedHandguns “Thereisabsolutelynoverifiableevidencetosuggestthatallowing concealedcarryoncollegecampusesmakescampusesanylesssafe; therefore,reasondictatesthatcurrentschoolpoliciesandstatelaws againstconcealedcarryoncampusserveonlytostacktheoddsin favorofdangerouscriminalswhohavenoregardforschoolpolicyor statelaw.” TimothyWheeler,There’saReasonTheyChooseSchools “Schoolofficialstypicallybaseviolence-preventionpolicieson irrationalfearsmorethanreal-worldanalysisofwhatworks.But whichismorehorrible,themassacrethattimidbureaucratsfear mighthappenwhenafewgoodguys(andgals)carrygunson campus,ortheonethatactuallydidhappendespiteVirginiaTech’s progressiveviolence-preventionpolicy?Cantherereallybeanymore debate?” WritingAssignmentsforArgumentation CollaborativeActivityforArgumentation 15 CombiningthePatterns StructuringanEssaybyCombiningthePatterns CombiningthePatterns:RevisingandEditing GRAMMARINCONTEXT:AgreementwithIndefinitePronouns AStudentWriter:CombiningthePatterns MichaelHuuTruong,ThePark(StudentEssay) PointsforSpecialAttention FocusonRevision PEER-EDITINGWORKSHEET:COMBININGTHEPATTERNS LarsEighner,OnDumpsterDiving “Ihavelearnedmuchasascavenger.ImeantoputsomeofwhatI havelearneddownhere,beginningwiththepracticalartofDumpster divingandproceedingtotheabstract.” DavidKirby,InkedWell “Iusedtothinktattooswereforeitherlowlifesorthosewhowanted topretendtheywere,butmymindnowstandschangedbythe thoughtful,articulatepeopleItalkedtoandthespectaculardesigns thathadbeeninkedintotheirbodies.Inaword,tattoosarenow officiallyOKbyme.” DonaldKagan,OnPatriotism “ForAmericans,asforcitizensofanyfreecountry,therereallyisa socialcontractlikethoseimaginedbythepoliticalphilosophers,and thatcontractprovideslegitimacy.Peoplewhotacitlyacceptthat contracthavethemoralobligationtodefendandsupportthecountry theyhavechosenastheirown—thatis,tobepatriotic.” JonathanSwift,AModestProposal “IhavebeenassuredbyaveryknowingAmericanofmy acquaintanceinLondon,thatayounghealthychildwellnursedisata yearoldamostdelicious,nourishing,andwholesomefood,whether stewed,roasted,baked,orboiled;andImakenodoubtthatitwill equallyserveinfricasseeoraragout.” WritingAssignmentsforCombiningthePatterns CollaborativeActivityforCombiningthePatterns PARTTHREE:WorkingwithSources 16 FindingandEvaluatingSources FindingInformationintheLibrary FindingInformationontheInternet FindingUsefulInformation EvaluatingSources 17 IntegratingSourcesandAvoidingPlagiarism Paraphrasing Summarizing Quoting IntegratingSourceMaterialintoYourWriting Synthesizing AvoidingPlagiarism AvoidingCommonErrorsThatLeadtoPlagiarism AvoidingPlagiarismwithOnlineSources 18 DocumentingSources:MLA ParentheticalReferencesintheText TheWorks-CitedList Articles Books InternetSources OtherInternetSources OtherNonprintSources ModelStudentResearchPaperinMLAStyle PhilipLau,TheLimitationsofWikipedia(StudentEssayinMLA Style) Appendix:DocumentingSources:APA UsingParentheticalReferences ExamplesofAPACitations Periodicals Books InternetSources ModelStudentPaperinAPAStyle PhilipLau,TheLimitationsofWikipedia(StudentEssayinAPA Style) Glossary Index ThematicGuidetotheContents FamilyRelationships JunotDíaz,TheMoney111 MarinaKeegan,StabilityinMotion178