my purpos for this letter , is to get an advisor for me in my master's degree , I have wrote what I wanted to say , but I need it to be corrected , spelling and the grammar , also I want it to be very...

my purpos for this letter , is to get an advisor for me in my master's degree , I have wrote what I wanted to say , but I need it to be corrected , spelling and the grammar , also I want it to be very polite .. and please check the note at the end of the letter .
Greeting DrMy Name is Areej I applied for Master Degree on Biology, I got acceptance from graduate study that in last year,and I just graduate from ESL program from Continuing Education at Dalhousie University. And Ms.Julie Walker advice me to contactyou to may you would be my academic advisor please. I am wishing and hoping to be one of your students .My main area of interest in Biology is related to Botany, and based on the criteria regarding admission to the Master of BiologyProgram, I hereby apply. I feel that graduate study at your University will be the most logical extension of my academic pursuitsand a major step towards achieving my objectives. I would be grateful to you if I am given the opportunity to pursue my graduatestudies with financial assistance at your institution and am able to justify your faith in me. I look forward to fulfilling myhopes and dreams at Dalhousie.


Yours Sincerely,


Areej AlkhalifahDalhousie ID : B00563515Net ID : ar284591


Note : I also need to include that I have a full scholar ship ,


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