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I wrote this assignment about my American trip but the professor said to me it was not good and gave me c because of some mistakes, so I’m going to scan the essay here with my professor comments.

The Professor said you talk too much in the essay about what happened to you and you did not give me what changed in your life. He wants what changed in my life and how is the trip has growth me, and he said read the question as well and rewrite the essay. So please I want you read my essay and rewrite the essay about the same topic, so you can find what changed in my life and a lot of information for me from my essay.

So please read my essay and understand it and rewrite it in good grammar and about the question that I put in the first of paper. You can have all my information from the essay. Please write it in organizing and basic words.

I scan my essay with my professor comments. So please read it and read professor comments and understand what should I need, and write it again in good essay in just 3 or 3 and half pages about the same topic and my information which in the essay.

I want to be in basic words.

You can know what my professor need in the last from forth page.

Thanks.

Paper 1: Personal Narrative For your first paper, I want you to write about a subject you already know a lot about: YOU. A personal narrative is an essay where you 1) tell a story about something in your life, and 2) how it affects who you are as a person today. A personal narrative offers readers a glimpse into an author’s life, and as a result, we get to see things from their own unique perspective. Describe a travel experience that changed your life. Even though most of us do some sort of travelling on a regular basis, few events can be described as “life changing.” Think about your past experiences (they can be vacations or day-to-day travel) and choose one that changed you. Where did you go? What happened during this trip? How did it change you? Did the entire trip change your life, or did one specific event have this impact on you? What kind of person were you before, and what kind of person were you after? Try to avoid writing about your study abroad experience here at Lindenwood—you have not completed that yet, so you cannot say that it changed your life yet. IMPORTANT NOTE TO TRANSTUTOR EXPERT: I wrote this assignment about my American trip but the professor said to me it was not good and gave me c because of some mistakes, so I’m going to scan the essay here with my professor comments. The Professor said you talk too much in the essay about what happened to you and you did not give me what changed in your life. He wants what changed in my life and how is the trip has growth me, and he said read the question as well and rewrite the essay. So please I want you read my essay and rewrite the essay about the same topic, so you can find what changed in my life and a lot of information for me from my essay. So please read my essay and understand it and rewrite it in good grammar and about the question that I put in the first of paper. You can have all my information from the essay. Please write it in organizing and basic words. I scan my essay with my professor comments. So please read it and read professor comments and understand what should I need, and write it again in good essay in just 3 or 3 and half pages about the same topic and my information which in the essay. I want to be in basic words. You can know what my professor need in the last from forth page. Thanks.

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David · Accepted Answer

Not Just Any Trip 
A lot of people love to travel around the world and visit several countries. As a 
teenager and a student, this was something that I aspired too. I always thought travelling to 
unknown places, understanding and adapting to different lifestyles would be something 
exciting and worth experiencing. I was glad when I finally got this opportunity to be a student 
in the United States of America.  
I was always a bright student in school in Saudi Arabia. Being hardworking, obedient 
and courteous always made me popular among my teachers and peers. This was an exciting 
period. I got used to that kind of life and felt very secure and comfortable. However, as I got 
done with my last year of school, there came a phase of depression and uncertainty. There 
were plenty of options to choose from, but nothing clicked for me. I was wondering if I 
should join a university, look for a job or start a business. This phase of six months when I 
was an unemployed teenager was very disturbing on all fronts. My parents were worried 
about me. They wanted me to make it big in life and mature as an individual. That’s when I 
decided to think differently and not just follow the herd. I realized that knowing the English 
language was extremely important to succeed in today’s world as it is the most widely spoken 
language throughout the world and very essential for doing business globally. I became 
certain that I wanted to learn the language and this sowed the seeds for me to come to the 
U.S.  
The trip was very significant for me because this was the first time I was travelling 
alone, without any family member accompanying me. I was just 18 then and a little anxious 
since I was going to a country alone without knowing the language of that country. It was 
also very difficult to leave family and friends. However, with every passing minute, I assured 
myself that I will be able to manage everything quite well.

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