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Microsoft Word - ARTS 1110 Essay 2 (W2020).docx ARTS 1110 Essay #2 Topics Stage One: Review one academic source (not a source identified for background reading below) and write a 500-word argumentative essay that answers one of the questions listed below. Be sure to cite the source in your essay. Stage Two: After receiving feedback on your 500-word essay, write a 1500-word argumentative essay on the same topic. Be sure to use a minimum of two additional academic sources in your 1500-word essay. 1. Trigger warnings about sensitive topics have become increasingly common in university classrooms as a way to reduce student anxiety and support mental health. Opponents of trigger warnings argue that they should not be used for a variety of reasons. Do trigger warnings limit academic freedom? • Source for background reading: https://www.aaup.org/article/mandated-trigger-warnings- threaten-academic-freedom#.Xi8qby0ZOu4 2. In recent years, various aspects of Indigenous culture have gained an emerging presence in the Canadian consciousness. As a result, many writers and artists have begun to explore Indigenous themes in their own work because they have been influenced by Indigenous culture in one way or another. Should non- Indigenous artists be free to explore the world around them or does the use of Indigenous cultural content constitute appropriation? • Source for background reading: https://www.cbc.ca/news/canada/british-columbia/newman- coleman-artists-open-letter-indigenous-appropriation-1.4437958 3. A number of studies have shown that regular consumption of red meat can lead to cancer and cardiovascular disease. However, other studies have shown that meat protein, including red meat, has many health benefits. Do those benefits outweigh the costs of eating red meat? • Source for background reading: https://mcgill.ca/oss/article/health/heres-my-beef-pro-meat-study 2005-2006 Regular Session ARTS 1110 - Introduction to University – Essay Rubric Name: __________________________ ___________________ _________ ____/100 Introduction and Thesis An effective introduction clearly and concisely identifies the arguable proposition that will articulate and limit the focus of the essay. It qualifies the claim being made (i.e., identifies the limits to the claim) and establishes the pattern of organization the essay will employ. Main suggestion for improvement: Argument and Reasoning An effective argument is well structured (i.e., there are no flaws in the reasoning). It seeks to convince the reader on the basis of logic and evidence. The writer has demonstrated the way in which the evidence supports the claim being made (i.e., evidence is not merely identified or discussed) Main suggestion for improvement: Pattern of Organization The essay is guided by a controlling idea. There is coherence to the essay, with a pattern of organization that complements the argument being made and transitions that reflect the relationship between important ideas. Each paragraph is organized around a single unifying theme. Paragraphs are arranged in a logical order. Main suggestion for improvement: Conclusion An effective conclusion returns to the claims that were made in the introduction. The writer synthesizes the essay’s main ideas (i.e., does not merely reiterate those ideas) and demonstrates the way in which the essay has established the argument as a reasonable one. Main suggestion for improvement: / / / / 1 | P a g e Resources/Research The writer makes effective use of secondary resource material. Cited material is current, relevant and authoritative. Cited material is well integrated to the text. Where annotations are required, the annotations fairly represent the essence of the cited sources and clearly explain the way in which the cited material will be used to enhance the writer’s argument. Main suggestion for improvement: Format and Style Title page adheres to template on UM Learn All pages follow APA 6 format (Running head, margins, spacing, In-text citations adhere to APA format Reference page adheres to APA format Text follows APA writing conventions Grammar and Composition Grammar, syntax, spelling, punctuation Diction – precision and clarity of writing Word Choice (e.g., essay is free of loaded language, ambiguous language, informal language or colloquial/slang language, contractions, abbreviations). r ri ci a r as r r : / / / / 2 | P a g e Total: 54 Name: Islam A Lab: B13 Introduction: 5 Argument: 11 Organization: 11.5 Conclusion: 4.5 popuptext: Your introduction presents many claims, and includes your opinion - look to avoid this. You have the beginnings of a thesis statement, but look to clear it up and establish a pattern that you can follow throughout. popuptext1: Your argument lacks structure. Your layout makes it a bit confusing for the reader to see what it is that you are arguing on a regular basis, so make sure to clear this up. Also, remember that this is your essay, so you need to integrate evidence in a way that supports your argument at all times. popuptext2: Your essay continues to be guided by a few controlling ideas, try and narrow this down to one. A suggestion is to look at the patterns that are being established in the essay. Your connections have been improved, but the body paragraphs should each unify around a single theme. popuptext3: Your conclusion should synthesize both your ideas and the evidence you used throughout. It should prove the thesis statement/argument as effective, and it should not introduce any new themes/ideas. Button1: Essay: [Essay 2 - 1500 Words] Resources: 5 Format: 5 Grammar: 6 Diction: 6 Macro Comment: - Consider looking at the formatting of your essay, making sure you are biding by the APA guidelines and are attempting to follow a pattern that you establish early. - Good research done that helped your argument, but make sure that all evidence is backed up by in-text citations. This is not done at all in your essay. - Try and ensure that you are integrating evidence in a way that supports your argument. popuptext4: Good research is done, but make sure that any claims you are making are backed up by academic sources with citations. Also, you have not annotated any of the sources (you needed to annotate two). FormatNum1: [2] FormatNum2: [1] FormatNum3: [0] FormatNum4: [1.5] FormatNum5: [1]