Follow 4.07 for the creating your argumentative essay. Make sure it is 5 paragraphs, double-spaced with infograph and MLA Works Cited page as you should have 3 quotes documented in the essay.
04.07 Outlining Your Argument I. Introduction In New York City obesity has become one of the significant epidemics in the recent period. On healthy eating and drinking habits have been seriously affecting the health benefits and wellbeing of the citizens in New York. It has been reported that citizens of New York are developing obesity in their early life, and it is an alarming concern that even the school children are suffering from obesity. The factors that are leading to obesity in children and the other citizens are effectively analyzed in this assessment. Primarily it is obvious to note that obesity refers to a complex condition that can occur due to social and physical environment, genetics, medical history and behaviors like poor diet and physical inactivity. Effective efforts regarding nutrition and physical activity can be implemented in order to solve these issues. This particular assessment draws two claims. Counterpoints and rebuttal points are also drawn associated to the claimed statement. Body Part I II. Claim 1 Soda should be banned in the New York City because it is harmful for the health of the citizens. III. Point A A. Soda drinks has high levels of sugar content, and hence harmful for health (Stefan). B. Support Statement- Soda tends to increase diabetes and cholesterol among the New York citizens. It has increased the probability of obesity among the citizens of New York. IV. Counter Point A A. Soda sizes should not be limited as there are other factors involved in New York’s obesity epidemic. B. Support Statement -Soda is not the only factor that is causing obesity pandemic in New York. There are other factors that are also responsible for the bad health conditions of the citizens of New York. For example, the bad food habits and lifestyle of the people are also contributing factor to worsening obesity conditions among the citizens. V. Rebuttal Point A A. Soda may not be the only factor of obesity pandemic in New York, but it is obviously a driving factor. B. Support Statement- Even though soda is not the only factor it is a driving factor that is responsible for the obesity pandemic in New York. VI. Point B A. Banning soda will cause unemployment and economic hardships among a section of population (Nakeshbandi). B. Support Statement- It is obvious that large number of people is economically depended on this product as it generates a lump sum of revenue in the food industry. The manufacturing units and the distribution outlets have large number of stakeholders who are effectively depends on this sector for their livelihood. VII. Counter Point B A. The authority should give more concern towards the health of the citizens than the resilience of the economy. B. Support Statement- The health disadvantages should be more focused because the economic viability and the quality of a life in a country depends on the health and wellbeing of the people in the society. VIII. Rebuttal Point B A. Economic disruptions will disrupt the economic growth and put more pressures on the available public resources. B. Support Statement- Banning of Soda means shutting down of large number of production units, people losing jobs, rise in unemployment and a gradual economic disruption. Body Part II IX. Claim 2 Obesity in the children can be prevented in the New York. X. Point A A. Good food habits and proper training from early childhood can help to prevent obesity among children (Janevic). B. Support Statement- Children should be effectively trained in terms of their daily food habits and activity to prevent obesity. XI. Counter Point A A. Effective measures are not adequate to prevent obesity in the children in New York. B. Support Statement- Genetic imparity can also lead to obesity among the children in New York. XII. Rebuttal Point A A. Promoting physical activity and healthy food habit will definitely help to prevent obesity. B. Support Statement- Physical activity is one of the best measures to prevent obesity among the children. XIII. Point B A. Obesity among children can be restricted at an early age (Rundle). B. Support Statement- Good food habits in the early childhood make a child healthy and physically fit. XIV. Counter Point B A. Obesity does not depend on food habits only. In some cases, it is genetic and medical intervention is required. B. Support Statement- But genetic imparity needs medical attention because such problems are innate. XV. Rebuttal Point B A. Even though genetic, obesity can be prevented by good food habits and daily exercise (Schroeder). B. Support Statement- Medical advisors suggest good food habits and physical activity for good health conditions. XVI. Conclusion In both the claims that are made obesity was the main theme that very effectively discuss in this assessment. New York City potentially focuses on the negative effects of soda on the health and wellbeing of the citizens in the New York City. While the second claim discuss about the aspects that can prevent obesity among children in the New York City. Both the claims are potentially counterclaimed and effective rebuttal points are presented countering the counterclaims. Obesity is one of the significant health concerns in the New York City and effective health programs are planned by the government officials to check the obesity pandemic. However, any programs or policies will have effective negative or positive impact on the economy and the society. Works Cited Janevic, Teresa, et al. "The role of obesity in the risk of gestational diabetes among immigrant and US-born women in New York City." Annals of epidemiology 28.4 (2018): 242-248. Nakeshbandi, Mohamed, et al. "The impact of obesity on COVID-19 complications: a retrospective cohort study." International journal of obesity 44.9 (2020): 1832-1837. Rundle, Andrew, et al. "The urban built environment and obesity in New York City: a multilevel analysis." American Journal of Health Promotion 21.4_suppl (2007): 326-334. Schroeder, Krista, et al. "Implementation of a school nurse-led intervention for children with severe obesity in New York City schools." Journal of pediatric nursing 35 (2017): 16-22. Stefan, Norbert, et al. "Obesity and impaired metabolic health in patients with COVID-19." Nature Reviews Endocrinology 16.7 (2020): 341-342.