Consider the impression you have: What engages you or draws you into the essay? Do you feel empathy for Staples? What would you add or change to make the essay more effective for you? Skim the essay,...

Consider the impression you have: What engages you or draws you into the essay? Do you feel empathy for Staples? What would you add or change to make the essay more effective for you?

Skim the essay, circling or highlighting words, phrases, or passages that give you a sense of being part of Jennings’s essay.