can you please help me check my structure, and also give me ur ideas to answer the question " look at ur priorities. you want a degree, certificate, career." waht is your priorities, and explain what...

can you please help me check my structure, and also give me ur ideas to answer the question " look at ur priorities. you want a degree, certificate, career." waht is your priorities, and explain what kind of live you hope to have and how college fits into these plans. As any other student, I also have my personal problem get in my way of my study. I have unfortunately not born in a happy family and wealthy. Therefore, I couldn’t get any support from my family on my education. But I have just got to hang tough. The word “college” is in the case many meaning. For my perspective, it means a path to successful future with many great promises such as reputation, great opportunity. Brian O’Keeney’s essay is about “How to make it in college, Now that you’re here.” He writes in the paragraph 27, “Look at your priorities. You want a degree, or a certificate, or a career.” My first priority in college is to work hard as much as possible to earn degree and then work on my career. In order to accomplish on my goal, I need to cut off free time and personal entertainment so I can utilize all of available time for studying and improving my learning skills in college. Furthermore, I realize that college plays a vital role in my achievement. It provided many of sources such as counseling department and campus psychiatric service where in will help you with your problems.