Are there places where you can’t follow my reasoning, and can you explain why? It’s hard to know why you are going from one source to the next in this order instead of another order since your thesis...

Are there places where you can’t follow my reasoning, and can you explain why? It’s hard to know why you are going from one source to the next in this order instead of another order since your thesis is unclear. The sources are good, but you need to have a main idea that helps me and other readers know why you are bringing in each source at each moment.